Drifting Away (REDRAW)

I figured for my final redraw, I'll do a full on render on a favorite piece of mine from 2021.
I wonder which drawings I'll decide to revise 2-3 years from now!!

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Drifting Away (2021)

PROS
The color choices are red, blue and yellow, a difficult color combination but well known!
Love the minimalist style shown here
Character is different from my usual style of art, mohawk, tank top, etc.
This is one of my favorite sleeper pieces, It was an experiment that turned out

CONS
Needs it's values to be fixed. If put on grayscale, its hard to differentiate between the subject and background
Also I prefer the minimalist style, it needs some more detailing in the water, sand and sky
positioning of the horizon line and subject can be altered to give more way to the ocean, truly drifting away